tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9041086302095067865.post2746060639346078077..comments2023-06-24T00:29:55.957-07:00Comments on Writing Desks and Ravens: I'm Just a Kid and Life is a NightmareUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9041086302095067865.post-48607043681268206432016-06-18T13:17:44.581-07:002016-06-18T13:17:44.581-07:00Apparently I am forced to write to at least twice ...Apparently I am forced to write to at least twice to get to you as I seem to have a computer glitch every time<br />I write to you .<br />As wrote before every story of teen shows and books seem to have a premise like this parents who are fighting and are not getting along. A teen who does't get any attention because parents are to self involved so the teens do things like pierce themselves die their to get noticed even if it is negative attention at least they are getting attention. These stories usually end with the parents realizing that they have neglected their kid the family makes up and they live happily every after in some loving moment. The parents tell them they hate the changes but the kid gets away with the things they did to themselves because of the guilt of the parents.<br />Blah Blah Blah.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<br />You have a chance to change this. You could turn the child into a hero instead of being an emo kid who is sad starving for parents attention they kidnap the parents and force them to ignored listening to angry fighting and concern for their child and turn the tables on them. Or this kid is becomes a millionaire by getting them life insurance and faking their death. Then having a homeless man pretend to be her lost uncle so she could pull this off giving the parents a tast of what they have done to her neglect them other than life needs until they learn what it is like to live in a house totally ignored feeling the same way she was hurt or just becomes a murderess and lives how she wants taking care of peoples families who don't love and care for their children the avenger for kids of abusive parents. I don't know but I have the seen and read the first scenario a thousand times it is a popular model for book sales but has been done to death I will be excited for a change even lesbian twist change would at least be different. good luck<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9041086302095067865.post-47167378405245527942016-06-17T21:50:02.878-07:002016-06-17T21:50:02.878-07:00She should be into other girls...but she doesn'...She should be into other girls...but she doesn't know it yet. This makes for an excellent plot twist. Possibly super girly and kinda preppy, people always tend to write in the mind of a lonely, outcasted, hated teen. When she finds out she's a lesbian, she has to decide how to keep it a secret or how to tell her "friends". Miss. Kayla Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04713278294984142920noreply@blogger.com